Now to collect feedback and round out the story with layering--the five senses, back story, foreshadowing and all that stuff.
Hope you enjoy the ending.
Shep shook his head. Clearly, the orgasm had shaken all the sense out of Charlie.
He cleaned them both off and stripped off the nurse costume before crawling into bed. Charlie lay on his side, draped over Shep's uninjured side.
Wrapping an arm around him, Shep pulled his head to rest on his shoulder.
"I thought you said if it wasn't strenuous, it wasn't sex."
"That's right. But this was making love."
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Aww. (and surely the nurses costume made it safer, too, right?) ;-)
ReplyDeleteThat's Charlie's story and he's sticking to it!
DeleteA very sweet moment.
ReplyDeleteYeah... It is.
DeleteAwwww... I'm in love now.
ReplyDeleteIsn't he sweet?
DeleteAwww...sweet!
ReplyDeleteIKR?
DeleteAww, sweet exchange.
ReplyDeleteSigh...
DeleteEr, a very fine line?? ;) Loved it.
ReplyDeleteNurse Charlie didn't allow Shep to do anything that might hurt him.
DeleteI like his distinction between making love and sex
ReplyDeleteShep does too, in retrospect.
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