Friday, October 19, 2018

Rainbow Snippets - Valraven

The raven flew above the battlefield amidst a bickering horde of his blue-winged brethren, waiting for victory to signal their turn below. Soon they would feast on the vanquished.
One of the others, too impatient to wait for the men to quit the field of war, landed at the edge of the struggle and hopped forward. A warrior sprawled on the ground stained red with his spilt blood. But when the gluttonous bird would have feasted, a drengr stumbled back and nearly trod upon the foolish creature.
The man brought his shield up to block an ax strike aimed at his undefended neck. He moved slowly and the blade bit into the wooden round, catching on the rim. While the ax-welder ripped the shield from his hands, he seized the opportunity to sink his sword into his opponent's gut.
The hot scent of blood followed by the sour stench of bowels filled the air. Not the last to feed war's followers this day.
Drawn off balance by his shield, another's spear point breached the hollow of his shoulder. He fell forward and clipped his head against the haft before it shattered under his weight.
The battle raged on without the warrior. The man would be his.


Valraven from valravn/valrafn. Val means the dead fallen in battle. Valravn is a raven who feasts on the war-fallen. In some versions of the mythos, if a valravn eats the heart of a king, he becomes a knight. For the vikings, this was not as distasteful as it sounds to modern readers. Ravens were revered because this is a culture built on war and glorious death.

The above is a snippet from the prologue of my newest story Valraven, a viking age paranormal story of war and betrayal.
For more snippets check out the Facebook group Rainbow Snippets.

8 comments:

  1. This sounds very interesting and gripping!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you!
      It's the very beginning of the tale before anyone, including the reader, knows what is going on.

      Delete
  2. Replies
    1. Thank you!
      I'm trying to emulate the sagas without bogging down too much in the literary devices of the time.

      Delete
  3. Replies
    1. Thank you!
      I hope the rest of the story lives up to my vision.

      Delete
  4. Very visceral. I'm looking forward to this one.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. It is set in a time and place were everything was more intense, more life and death. And the main premise doesn't skirt around too much.
      I hope you enjoy it.

      Delete