Saturday, July 15, 2017

Rainbow Snippets - Save a Horse, Dive a Cowboy

Working on the second draft of Save a Horse, Dive a Cowboy. Adding depth of character and setting, background and sensory information.

He'd had a headache the day before too. What was going on?
Shep stood on the front porch, stamping his feet into his boots. His wet hair slicked back from his face. He glanced up at Charlie's approach and picked up two steaming mugs.
Then Charlie smelled the heavenly fragrance of coffee and knew. Caffeine withdrawal headache.
Maybe he could convince Shep to add Banamine granules to his sweet feed.

They kept a store of the pain meds on hand for minor injuries sustained by the horses. What Charlie wouldn't do for some now. Or some of that coffee.

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9 comments:

  1. Ow...headaches like that are no fun.

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  2. Caffeine withdrawal headaches are the WORST!

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    1. Hoss will do whatever it takes to get wrap his lips around a coffee mug.

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  3. Ugh, caffeine withdrawal is awful. Poor guy...er, horse.

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    1. Caffeine is an evil, evil thing. Entrapping many a young man, and lord knows he's one.

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  4. Totally get the caffeine withdrawal - not fun!

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  5. Caffeine withdrawal is the worse.

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