Saturday, December 12, 2015

Rainbow Snippet - Dirty Pool

I hope to have Dirty Pool available before the end of the year. Here's a little taste.

Joe knew he liked to watch and the kid liked to be the center of attention. But it had taken some fast talking to convince him his boy was ready for it. The little shit actually said he wanted to see Joe’s needs taken care of not just his own. What the hell could Joe say to that?

So here they were, expanding their repertoire, reenacting a “scene” from that damn porno Steve’s boy had watched with his boy. Kid had laughed his damn fool head off over that. Joe could feel the corner of his mouth curling in a mockingly indulgent smile.

12 comments:

  1. I like it. Good luck getting it ready.

    Jana

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    1. Thanks! I've got some friends giving me a hand with that.

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  2. Interesting snippet. Would love to know more about the context. (Good luck with your deadline. The end of the year is getting here way too fast!)

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    1. Blurb: The Anvil isn’t Joe’s first choice for a night out. But he’s too well known at his regular bar to pull off what he has in mind—a night of sex and dirty pool. Joe’s going to sink some balls, but is Joe’s boy ready?

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  3. Playing pool is damned sexy if you do it right, and i don't doubt you will. Hope you meet that deadline because i'd like to read this one! :)

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  4. When I wrote it, I wanted a plain name, nothing fancy like we often read in this genre. I couldn't think of anything plainer than Joe.
    A while after I finished it, I was reminiscing about my time in college. I used to hang out in a frat house and one of the brothers taught me to play pool. I'd forgotten his name was Joe, and he's who I'd based Joe in my story on. All the little comments and tricks were his.

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  5. Interesting, looks like the scene will be compulsive viewing! :)

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