Naughty Nursery Rhymes Rule #1
Don't throw stones at glass shoes. - Cinder
Cinder is the main character in From the Ashes.
From the Ashes is a Cinderfella (m/m version of Cinderella) roughly set in 16th century France.
Roughly? you ask. It's a fairy tale, all of which are roughly set in a previous era. What does this mean? It means that magic and a fairy godmother exist in my story, but probably not in real 16th century France.
Unfortunately if you were looking for a story about a 16th century laundress, you will have to look elsewhere.
If you were looking for a cute, heartwarming m/m fairy tale, look no farther.
Dancing
couples parted effortlessly around them as the elegant man escorted him to the
center of the floor. Cinder's cumbersome skirts swayed and swept the floor,
threatening to entangle his feet past any hope of grace.
Fighting
down panic, Cinder frantically searched his memories for how to waltz. He could
do this. He had to do this. He couldn't risk discovery. He quailed at the
punishment meted out to servants impersonating nobility. If anyone guessed, he
would be beaten or worse.
Fumbling
as he tried to remember which hand went where, Cinder placed his right hand on
a broad velvet-covered shoulder. Strong, warm fingers enfolded his other hand
and gave a reassuring squeeze. The man seemed to sense his unease. The awkward
way he held himself, all tense and tight, had to be unmistakable.
Cinder
corrected himself several times as he either stepped off with the wrong foot or
tried to lead. How was he supposed to do this without harming either one of
them? Why couldn't it have been a pavane?
The
blasted slippers were so slick that Cinder had to hang on to the other man more
than he wanted to just to remain on his feet. He had the distinct impression
that the noble got the wrong idea from that.
The
man caught his eye and smiled, somewhat more predatorily than Cinder was entirely
comfortable with. What was going through the aristocrat's mind? Cinder began to
feel like one of the small cakes the footmen carried on silver trays.
Did
he want this man to gaze on him in that fashion? Cinder blushed and turned his
face awkwardly away. He needed to concentrate on the dance. He didn't have the
luxury of sharing soulful glances and chattering like a magpie.
He
needed to find some way to extricate himself before he made a mistake and gave
himself away. He didn’t normally have to worry so much because everyone already
knew he was a girl and would ignore anything he did. But this man saw him with
fresh eyes unhampered by the fiction of Cinderella. He would recognize any
misstep.
The
longer they were together, the more his risk increased. If he could escape
quickly enough, the other man might never realize the deception. The noble
might not care about an awkward woman he shared one dance with, but as the lie
grew ever bigger, the duped man’s anger, if Cinder were discovered, would too.
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